I threw streamers in the air,
Laughing, like I did not care
I looked to you as they fell,
And now you're in my way
I've never seen you before,
Rainbow mane, I just adore
You must be new here in town,
But now you're in my way
Your stare was holdin',
Rainbow tail was flowin'
You're just awesome lookin'
Where you think you're going, filly?
Hey, I just met you,
And yes, I'm crazy,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
I want to be your,
Best friend, filly,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
Hey, I just met you,
And yes, I'm crazy,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
And everypony else,
Wants to party,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
I went and gave you a smile,
That was as wide as a mile
And then you giggled and said,
"Wow, you are so random"
I jump, and giggle for joy,
At your smile, I enjoy
We're gonna be friends forever,
So let's eat cupcakes
Your stare was holdin',
Rainbow tail was flowin'
You're just awesome lookin'
Where you think you're going, filly?
Hey, I just met you,
And yes, I'm crazy,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
I want to be your,
Best friend, filly,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
Hey, I just met you,
And yes, I'm crazy,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
And everypony else,
Wants to party,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
I'm so happy you're in my life
You are my best friend
You are my best friend
You are my best, best friend
I'm so happy you're in my life
You are my best friend
And you should know that
You are my best, best friend
I want to be your,
Best friend, filly,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
Hey, I just met you,
And yes, I'm crazy,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
And everypony else,
Wants to party,
But my name's Pinkie,
So party, maybe?
I'm so happy you're in my life
You are my best friend
You are my best friend
You are my best, best friend
I'm so happy you're in my life
You are my best friend
And you should know that
So party, maybe?
Vision: Yes, like I said before, this fits Pinkie Pie so well. It is perfect for her personality! I give you five stars in vision!
Originality: Very original! I have never seen anything like this before! You have my vote for five stars!
Technique: Well, you are an awesome songwriter. I don't have very much to say here except that I give you yet another five stars for technique!
Impact: Not quite sure of the defenition, but your song just blew me away! Five stars all the way!
LOVE IT! Hope you write more!
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